Monday, August 26, 2019
My music Story Starter
In room 9 we have been writing about a music story starter.I chose the video So Good To Me because at the end of the story the girl finds her pet giraffe. I hope you enjoy reading my story.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Makayla, I liked your story it was amazing,
ReplyDeletewhat was the giraffe name?
Maybe next time you could do a story with their name with it.
Thanks but I didn't know which name to pick.
DeleteKamusta Makayla. I am your bestie Krystallynna! You worte all lot there! I am amazed of work! What I like about your work is is picture. And I also loved how you said they played hide and seek because that is my fav game to play! Keep up with the amazing work Makayla well done!
ReplyDeleteHello Makayla, it your bestie. You wrote a lot of information about that story. I like the end of the story because you found the giraffe and i think that you made it happy because you found him/her. I have some few's question. How did you got that photo and second I think you forgot next to the full-stop maybe you could space it because it would make more sense. Instead of I maybe you could change it into something else. I like how the girl in the photo patting her giraffe. Bye Makayla!
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