All Children Should Learn Another Language

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This term we are learning about persuasive writing. The purpose of persuasive writing is to change someones opinion or what they believe. We started to make a planner to organise our ideas and then we put them on a jamboard. We had to add the ideas into a hamburger plan and select an idea off the persuasive writing book and write why or not we agree with the statement.

Kiwi Kids News Article

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This week for reading we have been reading on Kiwi Kids News it is safe for children to read the news and do some tasks and challenges.I have done an article called Kangaroo escapes from circus in Germany it happend on October the 2th Saturday.Here is the link to Kiwi Kids News, here is my work if you have anything postive comments please comment down below.

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Do you know how to be safe in the water?

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In reading W.A.L.T… I need to use prior knowledge and knowledge gained from texts I read to learn about water safety. Our reading group gryffindor have been learning about water safety. I know I can be safe in the water by wearing a life jacket or wearing floaties or maybe suncreen. Don't forget to ask an adult to come with you or tell a family member where you're going and when you are coming back to be safe.What I could do to improve is add some more detail. What I did do well was that I made a poster that was clear to read.If you have any postive feedback or something that I need to fix up please comment down below.

Descriptive Writing

 

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This was the last week to finish our writing I have finished my writing in time. We were given a choice whether to write a descriptive piece of writing for a spaceship or a treehouse. I chose a treehouse please look at my story and if you have enough time to comment down below. 

Susie looked at her brother’s treehouse.   The roof was made out of hay. The walls were made out of wood and the branches were cut off. She could see sap coming down from the tree. She heard loud voices and she couldn’t identify everyone who was talking. She could smell fish and chips up from the treehouse. She could taste her saliva in her mouth. 

She heard laughing and her face went from a smile to a sad face. Her mouth was still watering, overfilling with saliva. She made such a loud gulp that her brother laughed at her. She described her brother's soul as like a thousand midnights. She heard a fizzy pop. Her face turned red, she clenched her fists and punched the tree. It had a tiny mark then it disappeared, she was so mad steam was blowing out from her ears.

 A full fizzy bottle fell down and she opened the bottle and drank it. When she was finished drinking the bottle she did a big burp and threw the bottle at her brother. Hay fell off the treehouse onto Susie and she started to sneeze.

 She coughed and sneezed, she started to itch her arms. She dusted off the hay then she threw hay on her brother. Then he started to sneeze and cough loudly. It was a disaster. Both of them were sneezing and coughing loudly. 

In the next 10 minutes they were normal again but still coughing loudly. More germs were spreading around the dusty treehouse from sneezing and coughing. In the next 30 minutes they were in the hospital coughing and sneezing very loudly. They were fine but when they got back they got in trouble!

The end!