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Monday, May 25, 2020

Returning to school writing.


Talofa lava,Readers Welcome to my writing about returning to school.Our teacher had given us some instructions about  animation to tell our what we did to get ready for school
 is still a draft but it will be finished soon.
Here is my story,If there is bad grammar 
or it doesn't make sense or any suggestions please comment it down.

6 comments:

  1. Talofa lava MakaylaJ this is me Myla. i like how u put full stops in and capital letters. Next time could you put in how u fell coming into room 11.

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  2. Hello Makayla.
    how are you feeling now that you have been at school for a week?.

    I have enjoyed playing games and listening to what the children have been doing.

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    1. I have been feeling good.What have you been up to in lock down? have you been playing board games or cards or electronics?

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    2. I was busy doing not much.I did visit my neighbour and trim her shrubs,fold her clothes and help her with odd jobs.
      I did do a couple of jigsaw puzzles.

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  3. Hello Makayla.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.

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  4. Hello Makayla.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I can't wait to see what other work you have been doing in class.Have a great week.

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