Hello readers yesterday My class and I were making flowers and I made this one. We watched a video about austin's butterfly when he improves his butterfly he went to 1 - 6 and the 6th one was amazing so I want to improve mine by you guys telling me whats wrong and what I can do. Do you have any feedback for my drawing. To improve my flower please leave a thoughtful comment. Is there anything I can do to make it better?
Hi Makayla. You have made an awesome first attempt at your flower. The main thing I notice is that the original has 5 petals that are quite rounded with a point at the end, Your drawing has 8 petals that are quite narrow. Do you think that you could try to make your petals more like the original?
ReplyDeleteHello Makayla.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you have got the shape of the petals.I like the way that your petals go outwards and then met at the top with a point.Maybe next time you could make them wider and do less of them.Are you planning on colouring your flower once it's finished?.