My first sentence was:"A boy was sitting on a couch",My other one was:"A nice sunny day",And the next one was:"A Bang! Bang! Bang! came from the tv".My Updated sentence is better than the 2nd 1st ones so I like the A Bang! Bang! Bang!.Does my sentence make you intersted in the story?.
Wednesday, July 29, 2020
Opening sentence starter
Good morning readers,W.A.L.T an intersting sentence starter to hook our reader.
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It's great to see you are posting some work Makayla.I am just not sure if you have actually improved a sentence.All you seem to have done is tell us about the starters you are using.Please catch up with me or let me know through a post,if I have miss-read your work.
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