Created:July 22 11:08
Edited By Mak-J
Owned by Mak-J
Made by Mak-J
Movie Made by FILMAKADEMIE/BADEN-WORTTLE
Bang! Bang! Bang! Came from the tv in-the living room. It was very gloomy and dark. It felt like a storm.Couch a big red bag so it is his.He hit one of the buttons then a bang! Bang! Bang! Bang! Came from the tv the boys name was Zack wearing a blue jersey,yellow shorts sitting on the couch.Beside the table there was potato chips,he was being lazy playing video games,soon the door opened his mother came in with a big brown box with small holes with a big dark black arrow.She said “Sorry sweetie I came in late because I picked up something”. “You should let some sun in” she said to her son,She opened the blinds. It was very bright. The sun was shining he started to blink because the sun reflected to the tv then he blinked.His mother said “Why don’t you open your present?” He said “Present for me?” he paused the game.The mother went up stairs her boss called she told him “Yes sir I don’t know where the papers are”He opened one side then the puppy came up.He picked it up he said “Ew!” then threw him down then he had pushed the box down to the ground when the puppy came near him zack had kicked the puppy then said “Go away!” then he unpaused the game then puppy saw a red bright ball under a white draw he started to run but he fell down he walked to the ball then the puppy had tried to get it but the puppy bumped his head then the draw wobbled a bang came the puppy put his head down the puppy used his teeth to take it out.He started to play with it.The puppy rolled around then the ball went in the box he paused it again when the box came off .The puppy wasn’t looking he smiled when the puppy looked he went angry then when the puppy came with the ball to the boy he smiled he got his crutches went to with the dog to the door when he got there he saw a giraffe toy near the door side then he opened the door a bit wide. He told his mom “Mom I'm going outside!” The puppy came near the door then had pushed the door open wide for zack.They got outside. He threw the ball then the puppy ran after it.Zack started to walk after the dog.
The End!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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