My Recount

Hello Readers/Bloggers,

Today this is my writing about to men robbing a dairy. So, we are learning to do a recount in order.

(A recount is something to learn in order to retell

what you did)

(Example.Jim and is had went to the lake to catch some fish.)

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I saw to men officer robbing a dairy the date was 8-3-2021.

It was raining to men sitting in a car I hid behind the car I put an umbrella under my head they got out of the car one of the men  looked really short he was  wearing white and red shoes he was wearing a cyan jersey and blue denim pants.

The other one was tall he looked angry he got out of the car  he was wearing an orange knitted  mask and a white jersey and grey pants with red and white shoes.

The man with a cyan jersey was carrying a bag the tall man the little man banged against the door then I noticed the tall man  he had a gun in his hand when they entered the dairy .

I moved my umbrella away from my head the security camera looked at them the tall man pointed a gun at him I was shocked I stood still shaking the gun was full with 4 bullets made of gold.

The man in the shop was making his eyes like he was cross eyed the tall man looked at the shopkeeper and was about to shoot just as the cyan jersey man was pretending like he could do kung fu but he kicked the wall and hit the counter then  he passed out

I went to call the police and I got in side of the dairy and said “Hey Stupid come and get me”

I opened a big pack of chips.

I threw them at the tall man he said “Wake Up! He said  to the short man”.

I got mentos and coke I put some mentos inside the coke I threw at them they were covered in coke the cops arrived then I ended up getting investigate then I had to pay a big fine. 

The end