Descriptive Writing

 

Hello readers,

This was the last week to finish our writing I have finished my writing in time. We were given a choice whether to write a descriptive piece of writing for a spaceship or a treehouse. I chose a treehouse please look at my story and if you have enough time to comment down below. 

Susie looked at her brother’s treehouse.   The roof was made out of hay. The walls were made out of wood and the branches were cut off. She could see sap coming down from the tree. She heard loud voices and she couldn’t identify everyone who was talking. She could smell fish and chips up from the treehouse. She could taste her saliva in her mouth. 

She heard laughing and her face went from a smile to a sad face. Her mouth was still watering, overfilling with saliva. She made such a loud gulp that her brother laughed at her. She described her brother's soul as like a thousand midnights. She heard a fizzy pop. Her face turned red, she clenched her fists and punched the tree. It had a tiny mark then it disappeared, she was so mad steam was blowing out from her ears.

 A full fizzy bottle fell down and she opened the bottle and drank it. When she was finished drinking the bottle she did a big burp and threw the bottle at her brother. Hay fell off the treehouse onto Susie and she started to sneeze.

 She coughed and sneezed, she started to itch her arms. She dusted off the hay then she threw hay on her brother. Then he started to sneeze and cough loudly. It was a disaster. Both of them were sneezing and coughing loudly. 

In the next 10 minutes they were normal again but still coughing loudly. More germs were spreading around the dusty treehouse from sneezing and coughing. In the next 30 minutes they were in the hospital coughing and sneezing very loudly. They were fine but when they got back they got in trouble!

The end! 

Matariki Word Collage

 Hello Readers,

This term we have been learning about Matariki. I have done a word collage saying some words about Matariki, here is a photo of my work:

Te Ngahere (The Forest)

 Kamusta Readers,

We have gotten different names for our classroom. I have chosen to do the Tui. Our classroom is Piwakawaka (It means Fantail) 

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Paper,Scissors,Rock Charcter Description

Kamusta Readers,

This week we have been focusing on writing a character description about Paper, Scissors, Rock. Our teacher asked us to finish this by Friday. I have done Paper and Rock. I have linked the video down below for you to watch it. If you have any advice to fix up my descriptions, please comment down below.

Yellow spotted lizard description

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2 weeks ago we started to research about the yellow spotted lizard from holes I have made a description about the yellow and some intersting facts about the yellow spotted lizard a fun is that lizards also eat sunflower seeds

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Instructions Checklist

 Hello Readers,

Today I have started to make a procedure slideshow to show you how to make a procedure yourself. I have taken my time to make a slideshow showing how to make a procdure in the best way you can.

Here is my slideshow

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All about me

 

Hi bloggers this is my all about me this is about me for this year.

Hi everyone, 

My Name Is Makayla,

This is my last year at school because  I am  Year 6 Student. In room 9 my teachers  name is Mrs Thorp  .The Name of my friends  is  Krystallynna,Leo,Jherean,Nijesh.My Favourite subject is swimming and writing.My favourite food is Bacon and eggs because it is nice with tomato sauce. My Favourite game Is  Streets of rage 4 Because It Is An Action Game.My family Names is  Jade, Harmony, Tony Mum, Dad.My family is kind and nice . When I grow up  I want to be an actor because acting is like drama movies. I like gaming because it is a like im a  couch potato sitting down and playing video games.